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At the Old Man’s Place


dusk breathes
in the junipers
and cottonwoods.
Windows reflect
the first swirling bats,
a few clouds, and
the leaves
from the fruit trees
he planted
around the house.
When a small wind wakens,
he smells wood smoke
from the stove.
Cold night coming.

A few cars slap
tires on the highway
pavement.

He closes his eyes
and listens,
hears the doves
in the trees
scolding him
for being late
with seed.



Benjamin Green is the author of eleven books, including
The Sound of Fish Dreaming (Bellow Ark Press, 1996) and the upcoming Old Man Looking through a Window at Night (Main Street Rag) and His Only Merit (Finishing Line Press). At the age of sixty-eight, he hopes his new work articulates a mature vision of the world and does so with some integrity. He resides in Jemez Springs, New Mexico.

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